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Personal Statement Example

http://www.essayedge.com/sample-essay_business-after.html In business school, personal essays are more often comprised of a series of several essays in which the applicant responds to questions posed by the graduate program. In this particular essay, the author wants to pursue the IT division … Continue reading

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“Beast” Personal Statement

The two personal statements I attached to this post are certainly powerful and exist as examples of how I want my personal statement to sound. Also, the commentary shows you how an admission committee interprets your personal statement – giving … Continue reading

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My Favorite Personal Statement

I found two personal statements while searching online that I thought were great examples of a great personal statement. The first one is on this link :http://www.studential.com/bio/getps.asp?ps=426&view=subject This one was great because I was skimming through the internet, a lot … Continue reading

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Personal Statement Example

http://www.slideshare.net/Maxisurgeon/sample-aadsas-personal-statements I enjoyed reading the second personal statement here (Essay#2). This person was accepted into the 2006 class of University of New Mexico’s dental school. I love how they started the essay with an engaging anecdote, a personal experience that … Continue reading

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For this week’s blog post, I have been struggling to choose between three personal statements that I thought perfectly embodied the qualities of being both attention-grabbing and complementing to the applicant’s background. The first one, by Mohammad O. Kahn (http://www.conncoll.edu/admission/apply/essays-that-worked/mohammad-o-khan-17/), … Continue reading

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Personal statement example

I searched for a good personal statement for med school and I found this : http://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=2&sqi=2&ved=0CDMQFjAB&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.healthdiversity.pitt.edu%2Fstudents-faculty%2Fdocuments%2FSNMAPersonalStatementsvol2_2_.pdf&ei=IrZ2UqCIG5ey4AP684HQCg&usg=AFQjCNF-cwz94mGz-PNjbgDNnOo8IRpwSw&bvm=bv.55819444,d.cWc It is a PDF file- sample essay #1 I liked her essay because she I liked how she is studying a humanities subject with … Continue reading

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Good Personal Statement

http://www.accepted.com/medical/sampessay01.aspx I really like how this person started their essay. It was very descriptive and shows their personality of not being a quitter. I could relate to them as well because of swimming. When you are in a relay race, … Continue reading

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